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Something quick I whipped up for you guys :D
happy madness day
Fire extingishers are coo.
Short and sweet.
Good job, but you could've done a bit better.
Remember, you had a year to make something for MD 08.
true, rushed work buddy
Could've been much better
if you made it longer but still entertaining! Keep it up.
i will :)
Alright so this was pretty good and i really like how you presented this There was some nifty scnes and what not, but mostly you have a nifty and unique submission here, so i cant wait to see how the rest comes out, and hope you keep making stuff like this. Haha ok that was pretty funny, and entertaining, i thought it was pretty amusing though, the only downside for me on this one was that it was way too short, so what i tell others on short short flicks like this one is to either make it longer and if thats not your direction then why not add a number of shorts to give off a more fuller and quality entry. But as far as the rest you did a fantastic job, with some nice animation and the idea of it all stopping at the end was also another good idea. So not much more to offer in the review except that i hope you keep up the positive efforts and good work, i really enjoyed what you had to offer in this one, and look forward to even more of what you can offer in the near future.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And once again we are here to make things bettermaybe some slight improvments or not, but regardless i hope you will look into some of the ideas that may help. maybe its just a small idea or advice etc just go with it. So one step in updating this as suggested above would be to make it longer and or add some other short toons since it was rather short, but by doing so you give some more quality to it, so either a longer version of this toon or lots of short toons.
Thanks for the review dude, this is old work so i def wont be expanding on this, and i barely finished this on time for the deadline at the time. I will let you know I had a lot of fun making this movie, and was again one of my first attempts at a fbf movie. Thanks for the review/support, maybe there will be another madness cartoon by me again in the upcomming years which will def be longer. glad you liked the general idea tho
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