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MADNESS DAY 08

Part II, Enjoy.

Part III coming 2012 September, Madness Day. Expect awesome.

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blaalbblaalb

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 22, 2008

the animation was good, but..

i think that the storyline was a bit confusing.. how did the scared guy get out of prison with the help of that girl? couldn't he have used his powers in his own? i didn't get the whole tortured person thing, and then the germans came out of nowhere.. and then the girl fell, and then the germans ran away and then the girl got ressurected.. like.. i don't get any of this.. the storyline is too confusing.. i think that you think the storyline is pretty clear because you know it better, but for us is really hard.. oh.. about the fights..they were a bit too short for my taste.. i dunno.. they were too repetitive.. like in every fight there is one dude who manages to only punch the protagonist and then gets shot.. i liked the variations of characters and all, but.. dunno.. trying to help :P try making more varied fighting characters and longer fights and the storyline much clearer.. complicated isn't always better..
~Ch!m!c


Deimaus responds:

Yeah, next one is going to be alot more fast paced / action. I've got it all planned out and characters are being drawn up.


theirishbottelcaptheirishbottelcap

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 22, 2008

flash

grate but it made my brane blead

<flash back in a flash >



YK-BlazeYK-Blaze

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 22, 2008

Meh....

to confusing, not that much killing.
that was not epic as i expected it to be, the story line was really confusing.
suddenly there are two brothers, suddenly there was a German dude that got the power from a scientific experiment, suddenly there is guy on a chair getting tortured by a guy with a mask which suddenly kills the guy with the scars. shoop was nowhere to be seen, the girl was inside a house when there was a really short fight sequence with the German dudes and died, then resurrected. to many characters coming from nowhere, the flashback only explained how the scar dude got hes strange powers, the girl somehow helped him. there was like 1 min of text and twin. there were scenes that there were only dead bodies without showing the shooting. you claim your self as the most original madness animator when you did nothing but short killing and make someone resurrected at the end for vengeance. you sir are no original. want to be original? don't animate madness but do not talk to people like: "you are no original, try doing what i am doing...." even though you are not original at all. i was expecting it to be one of the most original/well animated/interesting madness animation in the world. but you only showed how cocky you can get.


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Deimaus responds:

Yeah I suck. But seriously, thanks for the review. I'll take any constructive critics help to make the next part what this one wasn't for you.


MauledByWhatMauledByWhat

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 23, 2008

Sorry man.

I didn't really like this submission too much because I just wanted it to end between the middle of it because of the long subtitles that I couldn't relate to the storyline. But on the good side, the time and effort you put into this suprises me because most people would just say screw it and stop when they got frustrated but I see you haven't given up. Sequel would be nice?


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ThaScientistThaScientist

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 22, 2008

Animated well, but convoluted in Narrative.

Your art is great; the main problem is how convoluted the plot is. Your narrative is non-linear, which is fine if you do it right, but there was no particular order to your flashbacks and they were messy. The flashbacks were too much narration and not enough exposition of the more subtle kind.

The events are improbable, and time period seems undecided. How do you have Nazis existing in the same universe as supersoldiers wielding 21st century assault rifles, and why would two bounty hunter detectives from Nevada of all places be the ones to capture a mad scientist from Germany?

Also, while you explain the origin of the mad scientist and the woman who commands his forces, you give no explanation for the mouth guy or "pie bastard"--not even an improbability drive or plot device.

Also, it would have been nice to see some more spectacular fight sequences.


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