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MADNESS DAY 08
Part II, Enjoy.
Part III coming 2012 September, Madness Day. Expect awesome.
The animations were pretty good...you could work on some of it like when there just walking..i felt they were to stiff....ill give you that much but as far as the audio was concerned that is were i felt you were lacking. The gun sounds were not normal madness and the music at the end (ie. SAW Theme) i feel was used at the wrong time of the movie.....and there was a lot of reading involved....normally i can cope with some but you might as well said it was a book and not a movie...all in all i know u spent a long time developing and creating this flash and thats why i gave you an 8.....you would have got a 10 except for the issues of the sound/sketchy animation (only a little)/ and the text...keep up the good work and looking forward to seeing more work from you.....The Potential is there..you just have to capitalize off of it
sweet story dude, cant wait for the sequel
Good make more please :D
Wel hi der.
Please bitmap the blood next time, because even on Low quality it lagged immensely.
The movie itself is fine though some movements such as walking could be better.
too much text
imho theres too much explanation and text. if you look at action movies, they never have continuos lines of text flash on the screen, they may have a "4 years earlier" once, but that's it. sometimes there'd be a voice over or a montage to explain some background quickly. i'd say try to avoid having a too complicated backstory, or only if you have a really good way of telling it.
also i think leaving out the 'commenting' like 'no one walks away unharmed' etc. would be better. just showing the girl getting back up is sufficient.
A CARD BATTLE of magnanimous proportions!
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A little story about a guy named Abo who tries to create the best movie ever!
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