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I don't know if it's any good, But I do know, that if it isn't I'll improve it and re-enter it.
I'm going to make a part 2 if it doesn't get blammed, and a it's going to be even better. ^_^
Hope you like it.
This could've been better.
Okay for starters learn how to spell check you mispelled good with goof I dont see how anyone could miss that. Second of all slow down the text because I can barely read whats going on. Seriously give this another try and then I'll consider giving it a better rating
I didn't like it.
I am not really involved in Pheonix Wright, but the resolution of that movie was too low for me to even see what was going on. In addition, the text appeared about 5 seconds after the sound played for the chatter.
Needs some tidying up, but not bad!
I have not played the Phoenix Wright games, but you did do well I think with how you put the characters together for the interactions.
The story didn't get too far, but you definately need to either increase the window size or change how the text looks because it is hard to read at times due to the background, or the characters in the foreground.
As for the story, not bad.. kinda interesting but needs more meat to it for sure. The rest of it didn't have problems with :)
Work on your story (increase it or make it better), work on the text so easier to read & maybe add some laughs in, like jokes 'n whatnot. It'll help for sure!
Was pretty good but..
As was already stated you should probably work on speeding up the text fade in or just making it instant
The animation is smooth and the sound is all right, even if that beeping text noise can get on your nerves. The biggest problem I saw was that the 'fade in' text thing was not working. You couldn't see the text over the background and characters until after about 3 seconds and then at about 4.5 seconds the text dissapears to brig in the next block of fade in text that you won't be able to read for 3 seconds. Either bring the text in immediately (more like a typewriter...I think it will go better with the beeping sound) or fade it in faster (possibly replace the sound all together since it doesn't feel right with a fade anyway.
The only other thing would be to make it longer so that you can hook the viewer. Shorter stories don't give us enough time to get interested, so I think if you resubmited it with a bit more it would do just fine up here.
Keep going! You're on the right track!
Thank you for the advice. ^_^
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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