Score: 4

"Work. Needs a lot of it."

by: TailsDollFan

date: July 15, 2009

You really need to work a lot on this one, and from what I've seen, this isn't much of an improvement from the last one.

PROS:
-Nice Music.
-Decent Action sequence.

CONS:
-Weak story Development
-Weak Character Development.
-The random and uncalled for jump from the second episode to this one.
-The lazy character animation.
-Lack of personality.
-Obviously rushed.
-Characters are out of character.
-It was really short.

To summarize it:
This flash hasn't improved much at all from the previous episodes, and still lacks a lot of story and character development, and the character lack personality. It is also not clearly explained what is happening at all in the story. The animation was also very lazy.

Finishing thoughts:
Please take my advice into consideration in hopes of creating a good flash movie, I can easily tell that you have what it takes.
2/5 4/10

Score: 7

"Great"

by: Olzone

date: September 14, 2008

really liked the song in the beginning..^^ so fitting when it ends and shadow disappears
overall kinda short but good.
make it longer and maybe with some voice actors it would be awesome! ^^

Score: 9

"Very nice"

by: Deerinthefield94

date: September 14, 2008

I liked the story and te animation VERY NICE.

Score: 10

"amazing!"

by: banditsuit11

date: September 14, 2008

This is one of the best sprite animations I ever seen! I really think that a mix of characters from different surroundings really makes the movie good. Overall, this flash movie is great so.... Watch It!!

Score: 10

"Great stuff!"

by: explosiveoxygen

date: September 14, 2008

Very well done! Fun storyline!