Score: 4
"Work. Needs a lot of it."
date: July 15, 2009
You really need to work a lot on this one, and from what I've seen, this isn't much of an improvement from the last one.
PROS:
-Nice Music.
-Decent Action sequence.
CONS:
-Weak story Development
-Weak Character Development.
-The random and uncalled for jump from the second episode to this one.
-The lazy character animation.
-Lack of personality.
-Obviously rushed.
-Characters are out of character.
-It was really short.
To summarize it:
This flash hasn't improved much at all from the previous episodes, and still lacks a lot of story and character development, and the character lack personality. It is also not clearly explained what is happening at all in the story. The animation was also very lazy.
Finishing thoughts:
Please take my advice into consideration in hopes of creating a good flash movie, I can easily tell that you have what it takes.
2/5 4/10