MOAPAC - Episode 1
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- Comedy - Original
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- comedy
- moapac
Credits & Info
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Writer RhysMus
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Writer HewattWattWow
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- Sep 14, 2008 | 7:35 AM EDT
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Author Comments
HORRAY FRONT PAGE! Thanks guys!
Mungin On A Piece A Cake - Episode 1.
This is more of an introduction to the characters, there's still a story but not a very complex one.
Running time 8 Minutes and 52 Seconds so sit back, relax and watch the movie.
This is the first episode of the series Mungin On A Piece A Cake.
Join Tobby, Alex and Doughnut through an incredible journey to the wildest depths of their own home, the side walk and the supermarket.
What will they encounter? Who knows? I do! But do you?
Animation by Myself.
Story by Myself and HewattWattWow
Check out my ifone movie while your here :D
Reviews
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 14, 2008
its ok
There was too much time in between lines, so it made it slow. Also the voice acting was a liiiitle down. But, then again, it had a funny story, I think that if you improve in the sound, the whole thing is gonna get improved.
fair enough, we will improve on the sound a little down the track :D
we tried the best we could :)
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 14, 2008
lol
well I liked it
and now i like you :)
Rated 3 / 5 stars September 14, 2008
I agree with the guy below
You put a lot of effort into this flash, it shows. ut the jokes about Barney, the gay-acchino guy and so forth stink of thought and effort, and lack the feeling of true natural humor translated into a fash episode... which I prefer.
In short it feels like you put on the shackles a bit to make this episode, as if you self governed yourselves. The humor, plotline and music at the end all feel contemprorary, and not in a great way.
-Good animation, good voiceovers, and nice cameos.
-Bad plot, thoughtful yet run-of-the-mill humor, premise and adventure needs improving.
If this 1st episode is just a platform on which to uild, then I look forward to your future additions to this series, but please do make them better. Thanks. ;)
6/10 3/5.
yeah this episode was more of an introduction towards the characters.
thanks :D
Rated 4 / 5 stars September 14, 2008
It's ok
I can see you guys put some effort on it.I'm looking forward for this, it's got future.
well we still have ep 2 and three in our minds :D so hopefully they will go sweet!
Rated 2 / 5 stars September 14, 2008
Needs improvement
There wasn't anything really all that funny in this flash. It was complete and utter nonsense. What you might want to do is to quicken it up a bit, it moved too slowly to hold any interest. Openers with character introductions done in the "generic flash series" way also was a bad choice, it would have been much better to have introduced them as it went on. In any case, there is plenty of improvement to be made and alot of potential to still tap into. I'm just not seeing it now.
well my friends i believe you do not have a sence of humor :D
stay sweet :D