Score: 10
"words of advise"
date: May 16, 2009
The story line is asume and so are the charecters, but the artwork and sounds need more work.
The artwork is novice, ive only seen a slite improve ment on the move ment of the charcters, meaning that you need to pout the movments of the charecters in better signation, meaming youed haft to draw more, but that does mean the that it will look better.
Also, the charecters need more tecture, exspecoal lee the panther, who looks strait black and has blue streeks. and also the sword or phsycal phiting seens need more move ment .
You do have the backrounds doun, but the charecters need to flow with it, i mean for example, that when the charecters run , there moveing there legs to much, to the point were they look like there running on air.
And finaly the sound.
Needs lots of inprovement, often it sounds mufled, and scrunched together.
and also the sounds dont fit the things that are soposidley making it , like when a charecter is walking on grass, it sound like there walking on gravel or grass.
But all in all pretty good. What you have done is something that any one person could do over night, no it takes practice and pationts, and thats why i gave you 10 stars