This is my first flash so please don't flame me. I think its pretty good. I was having some problems with it earlier so i'm not sure if it is going to work(hopefully it does) constructive criticism is good. i'm gonna take a while off to learn how to draw with flash.
The quality starts to go a little downhill towards the end. I wanted to get this in before I headed out on my vacation and i didn't get a chance to polish everything and finish the story completely :(
 there isn't any audio and i can't figure out why so pick your favorite song and play it with it :) don't judge it for not having audio