Score: 6
"Hmm"
date: September 21, 2008
I think that this piece has great potential to be something much more than you currently have. You don't really have much of a plot, but it is something that can be worked on, as the tune that you started with is pretty good until you reach the trippy bit towards the end.
I think that it was going well until you decided to reverse, which just seemed like a bit of an animation cheat to me, so it needs to be taken further and given more form - give the guy arms and give him some sort of purpose that he can be used with on the whole scale of things.
A good start, but it needs a little more.
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