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Evolution of Mammals

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Sep 9, 2008 | 5:42 PM EDT

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made for my biology final last year and as a final for my media technology class

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eikedeuseikedeus

Rated 2 / 5 stars

sorry

Grate that you tell the story of evolution, but the aimation and voice related to the pictures, where to bad....sorry...



fakeloserfakeloser

Rated 4 / 5 stars

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Great for a school project. Way beyond anything I'd expect students to turn in if I was a teacher. I especially liked the simple 'morphing' effect you used - it's a nice way to quickly show 'evolution'.



anubis-the3rdanubis-the3rd

Rated 3 / 5 stars

very educational

it was very long and made me feel like i was in school so as for taht i give a kinda low score but the droneing voice reminds me of my english teacher so....ya



RedshireRedshire

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Education! Yaaaaay!

Nice work here! I'm sure this flash got you a decent grade for your classes, however it has some faults when it comes to being a Newgrounds flash. Let's have at it!

Voice:
I found it to be a little choppy and quiet. While you got your information through, I think it would have been better if your speech was a bit more clear in this video. If you were too close to the mic or if it was the mic itself, I'm not sure.

Basic artwork:
May not be as much of a big deal to some people, but unless it's meant to be really cartooish, I like to see detail. A lot of detail. The more realistic it is the better. However I'm not going to sit here and type that I expect you to get better at drawing overnight and try again, but practice makes perfect.

Basic animation:
Basically, I only say limbs moving. The occasional transformation was okay, and I saw movement improve a little as it got toward the end. Same as artwork, I like to see detail and life-like animation.

Very informative:
Excellent work on the project overall. It's always good to see something educational once in a great while.

Calming music:
You had this throughout most of the video, and I thought it fit the piece well. Very well, as a matter of fact. Well done.

Quiet parts:
Ape to man portion of the video was quiet. Big no no. I would have at least kept the music going or had some sort of narrative about the stages man had to go through to get to where we are now.

And that's about it. you get an 8/10 for effort, informality, and the fact I love Biology. Thanks for submitting!
~R~


McCreightProductions responds:

thanks i made the piece for my class and it was my fist attempt at a project in flash so i went for more basic animation since it was supposed to be about content.


KillexzanderKillexzander

Rated 3 / 5 stars

I like the idea of evolution....

But...im not sure if it was me of the flash but there was alot of video lag

And some chop issues othe than that refine your images and your well on the way of being an ace flash builder

3/5

P.s- bet flash helped you out bigtime with your grade, not that you needed it

hope to see you with a good job friend