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hope you enjoy it.
-Audio was too quiet; find a way to fix it.
-Mouth animations were out of sync; sort of followed the "blah-blah-blah" pattern, which frankly is a bit annoying. Try to match the mouth movements to the voices.
-Plot was lacking. Try a storyboard next time so you can put a little more into it.
Good try, but it leaves me wanting.
Make us more
The more you build with flash the better you will get
u may wanna try like a little tv show jingle at the beggining
and maybe some backround music the whole way through
thats funny and has the potential to be an alright "TV show" (that just so happens to be on newgrounds and not TV)
I didn't like it
The graphics were bad and it was hard to hear the voices
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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