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Here is something I made in my into to 2d Animation Class. I had a good reaction to it in class so decided to submit on here. I know I have a lot to still learn so I am hoping I can grab some good critic.
Oh and it is a bit quick. just FYI
Abit on the short side
Notbad but this was kinda short, you should make it longer and with the flash program you could add some flashy effects maybe even some color or something along them lines
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Effects and add more content
Decent but very short needs more
thanks for this.. it's cute
You aint kidding....
That really was a short. But i did like the animation. Not bad for a student in 2d animation class. Maybe next time there can be color or a bit longer or even both. not bad at all though.
Yeah I do have another one in the works well 2 in the works right now. Might post up again in 2 weeks. Thanks for the Critic.
drawn well....very well
P.s- very tired
Thanks for the Critic. Now you should Sleep.
It was very well animated. Too short of course but no doubt you're a good animator. Keep it up!
Thanks. I am hoping to be able to 3d animate when I am out of school.
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