Okay...

* Things you must do to improve your flash *

1)Fix the preloader
2)Add some sounds!
3)Make it longer,it was about 20 seconds long and it didn't make sence
4)You have to improve your drawing style
5)Think something beter for storyline,as i said it didn't make any sence

If you do those simple 5 things you will have a surely better flash

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