SRM short: McBurgerBell by Battosai810



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Submitted: 09/06/2008 | 02:36PM EST

File Info: Movie | 1.2 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Genre: Comedy - Original

Current Score: 3.91 / 5.00

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Author Comments

Well, this is my first cartoon since moving into college. Just an idea I had on the road driving up to Boston, nothing too special. I thought it was pretty funny when I was writing it, and I hope you guys think so too.

Also, this is continuing my new deal with using only royalty free music, at least until I start composing my own.
Thanks for watching, and hope you like it!

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Average Score: 8.9 / 10

Score: 7
Dapper

"Entertaining but..."

by: Dapper
date: October 23, 2009

What was the plot exactly? They go to a restaurant, order bad food and then the climax ends up being:
"We should get going."

But I like the setting and that McBurgerBell character. If you made it longer to be a full 3 minute episode, it would be better - and with a lot more interesting ending, of course.

Good work, I hope to see your flash movies in the future, (SRM Goes to College - NOW!)

October 23, 2009

Author's Response:

This was just a short I made to test out Flash CS4 on my then-new computer. I'm pretty satisfied with it, although you're right in saying it needs a better ending punchline. I'm not sure how well I could preserve the idea for a 3 minute short, but maybe McBurgerBell will be revisited in a future SRM toon.

And I want to make SRM Goes to College :( I just don't have the time right now. It could be my final for an animation class; who knows. Thanks again for reviewing my stuff!

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Score: 10
Tankdog12

"nice"

date: July 14, 2009

but what really motivated niko to buy...... a boot.......

July 20, 2009

Author's Response:

Not even he knows, and I've probably forgotten by now. Glad you liked it!

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Score: 10
chillidog66

"i love this thanks!!!!!!!"

date: June 1, 2009

u rock thanks!

June 1, 2009

Author's Response:

You're welcome?

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Score: 10
AlienHive

"Nice flash!"

date: May 7, 2009

This flash is funny! I found out that the 'burger' in the restaurant is actually tacos combined into one. I found out too, Niko reappears after his appearance in Petty Crime Spree.

May 7, 2009

Author's Response:

I like reusing Niko, and I wanted a kind of gross experience of fast-food food. Glad you liked it :)

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Score: 9
Dougy242

"enjoy the cancer"

date: February 26, 2009

lol gotta love fast food

February 26, 2009

Author's Response:

The service industry is a terrible yet wonderful thing.
Glad you liked it!

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