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Submitted: 09/04/2008 | 05:21PM EST
File Info: Game | 525.9 KB | Add Game to Favorites
Current Score: 2.06 / 5.00
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Thats my first Flash-Movie now. I hope you don't blame it, because i had two weeks of work for this few seconds ^^ But i hope you can give me much of critics. Thanks a lot. I'll learn many more in my Flash-Future.
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Average Score: 4.7 / 10
"i have hope in you"
the problem is that it look more like a movie than a game well ether that or i don't know the command still it is your first work but nice sound efect could use some music some instruction since it is filed under game and take your time and give a 100% in your work.
You're right, thanks for that.
"for your first time"
Not bad for your first work. Yeah, ok, its not as good as other NG stuff, but this is your first; your'e learning. Keep working on it!
"this is crap"
there isnt anything good about this at all. that was the worst interactive movie i've ever seen.
"better..."
then my first flash and my stuff is still getting blammed after like 8 so i do see potential in you i hope you make more in the near future keep it up
i will. thanks for your words. ^^
"You gotta start some where right?"
You just gotta refine your skills man....keep practicing , and also make sure you know how to submit your work right.
Keep at it man.