Score: 9
"Good"
date: November 21, 2008
GOOD: Oh sweet nicks this was gold. I like the idea of an elephant working at several places. The intro was a bit awkward but like what the last person said, as soon as Oxmar started talking, I felt kit was promising. I love his voice and the kid's reactions were priceless.
BAD: The father's voices felt low on volume and went pretty low that it was a tad bit difficult to hear him.
IMPROVE: Fix the voice acting so the father's voice doesn't sound so low.
OVERALL: I love the idea and I thought it was hilarious. Pity that I have to conceal my laughter so I don't disturb my family. Good luck on your new series. It seems very promising and I'll be sure to check out your future submissions.