Score: 4
"Your author comments made me laugh"
date: September 1, 2008
...but nothing else did.
Tired, lame jokes don't help the fact that your flash lacks a comedic focus. Before I watched it I thought that the idea of "Poopopolis" would be some kind of mockery of the idea that a Poopopolis is funny, but I was disappointed that you didn't take it there, you just stayed inside the boundaries of old teenage potty jokes.
Even though it wasn't funny, and didn't have a proper beginning, middle, and especially conclusion, I admire your animation style (though it could be cleaned up a bit), effort, and proper voice recordings, thank god. Your use of backgrounds, movements, and different shot types was very good.
Open your mind more.
