Score: 10

"..."

by: Gauntletier

date: July 30, 2009

I assume certain people don't quite understand the message, obviously I thought the reality of the matter was less than appealing to most and thus people lost sight of what it was really about. I on the other hand have placed close attention to it and although the message is relatively abstract, in the same way it's rather simple. This is why I liked the movie. Because you've obviously got a great mind, but perhaps in future you could make your movies somewhat longer and try to place some form of proper animation in to convey your message better. Kudos, and I will keep this message in mind, because I often am quite regretful of past decisions, and it has weighed me down somewhat. Still, life goes on, and good luck.

Score: 4

"nope"

by: skydull

date: September 17, 2008

This is quite high score for a low quality video but I guess I gave you this because of the B in it.

Needs
Animation
length
plot
logic

Score: 1

"Regret?"

by: Coop83

date: September 13, 2008

So what is it that you regret? Do you perhaps regret not having written such a simple song and submitting it to the Audio portal yourself?

I think that you've lost me with this offering, as it could have a great many meanings. The letters in red don't spell out anything that I could make out, so there was no subliminal message. It's a very simple slideshow, that could have been so much more, if for a key component, that was forethought.

I wonder if that is what you regret?

I regret not being able to write anything more positive about this flash.

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Score: 2

"Simplicity?"

by: svinepels

date: September 13, 2008

Is this based on your own experiences? I agree with you, regret is in fact a burden. This flash, however, isn't very good. It's just words and no actual animation. I liked the music choice.

The points I give this flash is based on how much effort you put into it and how good it actually looks. It looks smooth, but it's short and I can't imagine that you put much effort into it. It would be unfair to give it over 5 points just because it's based on simplicity and is good in that way...

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Score: 1

"\m/"

by: Haggard

date: September 12, 2008

Well, the story in your author comments is actually more intersting than the flash itself.

The flash just offers some of that "nice" elevator music that annoys you after three seconds and the sentence "Regret is the greatest burden a man can experience".

So there's not much to review here, I'm afraid. You should have animated the story you described in the comments. Would have been much better... and you also could have used that "Regret" sentence in the flash, as some sort of "final thought" for the main character.

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