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something i did on pivot while i was inspired...by star wars ......YAY ^^ i did this on pivot......so rate me well ^-^.....plz...if u dont like it u are a idiot!!!!! so if u are tha t idiot!!!tell me why u didnt like it
I'll review it like a flash submission
~ Animation/Graphics ~
Terrible all around. Stuff that you didn't make and you just copied from somewhere else, which is fine because I tend to do sprite stuff every now and then and this really isn't any different.
Please for the love of god put some kind of background into the submission. No detail no anything. Would have been much better if they were in some sort of space station or something similar like that.
Animation was so shaky and wasn't smooth at all. Hmm, looks like you really didn't try to make it that great and that you rushed. Not saying that you did, but that's just how it looks.
~ Story/Content ~
None whatsoever. Why though? Just because it's in pivot doesn't mean you can't do something with some sort of story behind it. Nobody wants to see a stick fight that lasts less then a minute with hardly any action whatsoever and on top of that no reasoning behind anything. Some people can make good ones like that, but you didn't do a great job of it.
Perhaps making it longer, etc..
I recommend getting flash and doing stuff in there with it. Even with my videos I do stuff in flash with it. That would make my live action videos more flash then your little stick guys. Ironic no?
~ Audio ~
A submission like this not only needs a story, but also needs voices for the characters. This could also include animations for the mouth movement, but I don't know if your ready for work like that yet so keep practicing.
Music was alright, but I would also like to see you do something with sound effects. Lasers, swooshes, etc.. You know.. the small details that make submissions good.
~ Overall ~
I like how a Jedi impersonates an Imperial officer and Vader useing the Lightwhip(Laser whip), but Vader never uses a lightwhip. Btw no Jedi could kill Vader.
wtf is pivot?
it makes your movies have a grainyy look to em that i like but its a lil choppy like everyone else says.
What is pivot
And if its so hard to do then why not just make em on flash?
because i dont know how to do them in flash u retarded assrape fuck girl......
There will be many viewers who will jump immediately to criticism and fault your style when it comes to the judgement of this video. However although there are some flaws present i was rather impressed at the type of animation used here, the style and technique was non like i have ever seen before and so i believe that you must be commended for you courage to deviate from the false glamour that normal conventional animation brings. This is however a work in progress with various faults such as quality and clarity but I beleive you deserve a respectable 6 for your efforts.
YAY ^-^.....SEE NOOBS I GOT A 6 FOR EFFORT MUAHHAHAHAHAHAH
make better graphics and make it faster and longer
ty ...already know this......to anymore 1 whos gonna post this kind of comments plz note that this was one of my first pivot animations and im just putting them in to flash so yeah they are choppy in the FPS because i didnt care that time i just thougth it would be funny to make this kind of stuff.....
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