Score: 3
"*sighs*"
date: September 26, 2008
Engaging review mode, let's get this over with...
+ Better animation than what you have been doing. That's good.
+ More fitting sprites and animations for the song.
+ Rrrrrrrandomness!
- Absolutely HATE that song.
- ... Speakonia is the tool of the devil. Do us all a favor and trash it NOW. Find actual voice actors if you're going to use voices.
- I said better animation, yes. However... Still sucked. Work more on that.
- Some of said randomness was still out of place. As I said before: Don't put randomness where it doesn't belong.
- Return of the sprite borders. This needs no explanation.
Overall: Wasn't bad, but definitely wasn't good. Practice more with LiveSwif, or something better: Actually use Flash. Seriously, most of the submissions here are done with flash, and all of the good ones are done with flash. In other words, practice making good flashes. If they turn out crap, redo it until it's good. Tweak it down to the last pixel.
September 26, 2008
Author's Response:
Thank you. Yeah, it is kinda worse in animation, but it is too expensive this flash.
