Score: 9

"very very impressive"

by: WhoMe232

date: October 14, 2008

i wasnt expecting much by your low expectations of mine, but it was pretty damn good. I had to watch it two times to figure out what to comment and critcize. Couple things; i say you should get a new animation for Marios running (when he was chasing the ship), it personaly wasnt the best. Another thing, it took me a while to realize that that floating shoe was actually an airship. I say at the beginning, you zoom out the camera (focused on the ship), get some pretty scenery in it, and show the scenery moving, to really get the feeling that the ship is actually flying.
One thing in general that i tought could be improved was that the movie was all action all the time. You got the heart-pumping excitment down really well, but you need to master using slower parts, and contrast. For example, when Bowser delivers his final hit to Luigi, you stretch out the last note really long, and you have a black screen for about fifteen seconds. You see Mario waking up from bed, awakened by a nightmare or thunder, and he slowly gets up, looks out the window, and a bolt of lightning illuminates Bowser for a second, as he says the whole thing about getting back Luigi.
Ehrm, i hope you understood that, and that i somehow helped you. Love your style, and i will probably see some excellent work from you.

Score: 10

"i used to hate mario movies"

by: zootoo8

date: October 12, 2008

but this........this is awesome the battles the blood the action i loved it

Score: 8

"Okay, um, where do I start?"

by: chaosportalfilms

date: October 7, 2008

The animation was good, it conveyed the message well, but the stick figures bothered me, and not in the usual way that it bothers people. I'm a big fan of stick figures, and I'm a big fan of Mario, but they weren't quite mixed well. The plot did not support it, and it seemed like you were just trying to find an easy way to be able to use stick figures to represent characters. Also, there is no real indicator of who is who with the the characters. I had a vague idea because I'm familiar with the franchise, but what are people who do not follow Mario as closely as you or I going to think. Overall, it was a good animation, but you should have created your own characters to go with it, or at least strengthened the story a bit. I thought it was just all way too convenient. So, there was some good and there was some bad, and this is the longest review I have ever written for someone. Congratulations.

Score: 7

"good story line"

by: Moomana

date: August 22, 2008

but the fight scenes need a little work. Overall its pretty good though

Score: 10

"EPIC"

by: Tawnik

date: August 22, 2008

I can comment this animation and this guy (Mesmay) with one word,the word is EPIC !!The animation is ultra smooth,well eased and dynamic I like the way you are animating,it's NEVER boring :)

Thank you for thanking me :D