Score: 6

"that was ok"

by: kojay

date: June 9, 2009

quite bland and dry but theres something about it i like
must be the characters, yeh the characters

Score: 5

"Pretty Good"

by: The-Great-One

date: May 16, 2009

The artwork is great, but the animation isn't all that great. Your sound and voice acting are a bit scratchy. I suggest you get someone to actually make you a theme song, contact TheNossinator I'm sure he'll be glad to make you a song. As for the story it made sense at first, but the exploding board game didn't make sense and just made the story fall apart, it really would've been more fun to show them putting the army men in a microwave or something. I would like to see more from this series though.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Good Animation
*Okay Story

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Sound
*Bad Voice

Score: 7

"Good"

by: Haggard

date: November 23, 2008

Animations and graphics are a bit rough, but they are still decent. They just need some more work here and there.

The major problem here was the muffled voice acting. It was a bit hard to make out what the characters where saying. Also sometimes it could be heard that you breathed pretty heavily into the mic. This is annoying to listen to and can also be avoided quite easily. Try to move away from the mic a bit further so that your breath doesn't hit the mic with it's full strength.
Also, a mic with better recording quality would be nice to have, so that the sounds aren't so muffled any more.

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Score: 7

"Weird"

by: Coop83

date: November 22, 2008

A nice little flash, that has a slightly deranged plot line. I like it.

I think that you could use a slightly better quality mic, or move a little further from it - the voices did sound a little muffled, as if you were breathing a little too heavily into the mic itself. Try maybe turning it down a little, so that you can hear what is being said properly.

I think that for the first episode, you could still have expanded the plot line slightly - this is more of a set up and knock down play, where little introduction is needed, but if you're going for a series, you need to juxtapose the characters properly - we don't even know their names, just that they disagree about the wax / plastic elements of the toy soldiers.

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Score: 7

"Not to bad."

by: Fro

date: November 21, 2008

Not that bad at all. I like the simple animations like this. Sometimes they are just as fun to watch as the really highly rated submissions. So I thought your animation and graphics, while just a little rough, weren't that bad. Not to say they don't need just a little work, but not too much. Sometimes the mouth didn't really sync up with the voice acting and everything. The bomb exploding needed to be animated just a tad bit better and the sound that followed the explosion could have been timed just a bit better. What really needs to be worked on is the voice acting. What I recommend is moving away from the mic so you aren't catching that nasty breathing noise that you almost managed to get in every single line. Also, when yelling don't lower your voice. It sounded like you were doing a fake yell. The one that people do when they want to represent yelling and they actually make their voice more quiet by doing this. So the biggest thing to improve on about this submission was by far the voice acting. I think that I would have rated it much better if it wasn't for the poor voices.