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Bachlava intro(preloader)

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Please tell me if this is good or not with the animation/color/concept. Your feedback is welcome!

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I like it.

The concepts not bad but when he hit the guy you should show the foot to the face and then get more detailed with that. Add some color to the characters as well. But the Concept isn't bad. I hope you have big plans for this cuz I can't wait to see it!

meh...

i would tweak the art a bit and add some sound but other than that not bad... and just so you know... you should probably explain that when you titled it "bachlava intro" that you meant your preloader or whatever to future flashes cuz people dont pay attention and thought it was either an intro to a series or something stupid like that

Has potential.

Of course you need to make this at least ten times as long, with a catching storyline, and audio. But the beginning is there.

Too quick

Yes the animation was good but seriously just do a better job next time

Credits & Info

Views
3,233
Votes
4
Score
3.38 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 21, 2008
2:49 AM EDT