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The First Half of a Documentary About the 7/7 Attacks.
This is yet another school project, just over a year since my debut SPACE: The Edutainment and my greatest work yet! It was too big for 1 swf so it was split into two.
But I just couldn't watch much past the intro. The voice audio was very quiet, and the explosion effects were at least four times as loud. Thankfully I hadn't turned my sound up to hear the voice, but it did make it impossible to understand what was being said while the effect was going off.
In the future, I would suggest checking the audio and sound effects to be sure they are at a consistant volume and adjust them accordingly. There are plenty of programs that let you listen to audio clips side by side and make the nessesary adjustments. Also, when possible, effects that are supposed to be somewhat louder than the voice acting, like explosions, should be placed in between sentances so as not to disrupt things, particular in a documentary format.
I think the intro should be a bit shorter. And I think the lip-synching definitely needs more work. The content and style are generally quite good, though.
really dull....hope you next one is better
I couldn't watch it past the intro as it was boring me to death, spice it up a bit, add a little bit of humour or at the very least shorten the introduction in future
Animation was good so that really is the only reason I gave it a 6
The general idea was interesting too so that upped the score to a 7
Good luck in future and have fun.
Try part 2 more action and cool music!
not bad =D
i like the drawing and stuff =) great job ...
An old storyteller enters a city with nothing but the stories he wishes to pass on...
Reaper uses his ultimate as it should be.
GwainSaga - (Original Serie)
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