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it started well but then i just gave up and came out with that crappy ending :) enjoy
Could be better.
Try slowing the text down so people can read it. Also, add a pre-loader. Also, graphics could use some work, but I can tell some effort was put into it. 2/5.
i was kinda confused how to do the preloader so i just left it ...p.s ill slow it down next time ty for the review
I see potential
Overall that flash sucked hard but I still more potential in ur work and I hope to see something better in the future
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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