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Hi guys this is my very first movie i only know the basics i think. so thank you for watching
WATCH OUT FOR PART 2 ITS GOT A HOLE LOAD OF ACTION
With the last reviews comments I can see you can't take Criticism. So I won't give you any. Instead I will just say I didn't Like your animation for the exact reasons he didn't.
You know this is gonna be bad before you watch it.
Seriously, you need to work on your grammar. First off, in the title, it should be written as "Sonic's Unexpected Adventure." Capitalize the "U," the "A," and give the whole word "Adventure." I understand though if the title is too long for Newgrounds to accept and you shortened it. I don't think I saw one period in the text; make sure you put them in so we know where the sentences end (yes, I do know there were question marks and exclamation points). Also, remember to check your spelling. That gets pretty annoying. Plus, use the same font for the text and keep the dialogue boxes ON THE SCREEN! Grammar and spelling errors are always signs of ametuer animators.
But what really killed this movie was the animation itself. You need to take the time to straighten out the sprites. Sonic just keeps moving around all over the place when he's supposed to be standing still. You'll have to be patient if you want the movie to turn out well. And make sure the sprites are in proportion to other sprites on the screen. For example, Sonic and The Hulk were fighting in the street, but when they went up the side, they were enlarged to almost the size of the building itself. Just zoom in on the background if you want to fix this. I think you wanted this to be an action movie, but it is seriously lacking in that area. Somehow I do not think Part 2 is going to have "A HOLE LOAD OF ACTION." And adding The Hulk into the story? Pointless. I'm sure it will be relevant to the story later on, though.
I honestly do not think you put any effort into this. Please try harder next time.
Pros: It's got a good storyline, tons of action, (at least the series will), there are
misspellings but I can understand what they're saying, It's a
"Multiple-world-Sonic-Shadow team up", and it's has great music!
Cons:An overuse of "What the hell " and could be a bit longer. that's why it's a 9.
Overall: You are awesome if this is your first movie and you only know the basics!
P.S. I liked the use of running up walls in the first fight.
Thanx alot well part 2 will be out sortly keep watching my vids :)
Good but Needs Work
I think it was OK, but needs to be cleaned up a bit. There were a lot of spelling errors and well as you need to pick a consistent font for when the characters speak that is easy to read. Also, watch your borders because the text sometimes gets cropped. It has potential, just needs some work.
I would like to see it cleaned up then resubmitted :)
okay, i'm glad you put you're first flash on newgrounds and all... but they're are things
that need to be tweaked. first of all, sonic was big and eggman was small. second, sonic didn't look to be walking on the ground. and also the sudden changes of the dialogue box made it hard to read or even see the dialogue. im sorry but before you put out a second one you should include an enhanced version of this one.
well all i can say is thanx 4 watching and thnx 4 the 2
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