Score: 10
"nice to see"
date: March 23, 2009
you have someone that special in your life, now grip to that person hard ;)
also I though of some tips, if you were thinking of making another this year
first that stickman thing by the bottom is nice and entertaining, but now try just making normal drawing representations of you and your gf by the left side (people take more notice of things there so it seems ;p)
put a slow animation on you both, like wind blowing through your hair and you two holding together, that way it will give a nice romantic feeling and that the time when you two are together seems an eternity....but an happy eternity ;)
and how about you talk on how your relation started and continue?
like a story( so try making a photo clip session but with various photos following one and another, or something :P, to give an animation feeling)
also with that story try putting more songs you like( the amount should be the same amounts of the parts you wish to divide the story in) also put the song in a progressive way, start with a favorite song you may have, then culminate in the last part with the song you both love ;)
March 23, 2009
Author's Response:
Amazing ideas for the future my friend. By far the best review I have gotten on this submission yet.
Thank you.
