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this is a big file for the sounds effects, im sorry for the big file, i do it the flash in one week, please, enjoy, this is a animation created with alligattor flash, if you know a free flash creator we can read jpeg.
gif. and bmp. please tell me
exuse me, but mario looks like he has been cut out from something.... i can see wight lines around him, but good flash. can you make the yellow, i think credits dissapear?
well it was still good. not bad for a trial
hmm.... you are not very fluent in english are you. If you make another flash you could message me what you are saying and the movie maybe i could fix it up for you.
But on to the review
Really not much happened and it got kind of boring. next time put some action or comedy in it.
Not a bad first flash
Had some susspense and ran a little smooth. Work on the animating a bit and it could be a good flash!
The thing in the middle could have dissapeared, The spriting is not really that good, Lack of clean movements, and maybe compress the Sound Data. It seems that ure not adept with English writting, which could mean that ure not an anglophone, or ure anglophone that has a major problem with english, then u should maybe let someone correct ure script before publishing it. Don't give up and Stand Straight.
better i use macromedia ok?
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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