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*To get the most out of the movie, I recomend using ear phones and volume up.
I also recomend watching this at night
One of my very recent works since Pina Story.
Based on actual events..
Special thx to some of the NG fans in credits. tysm
i thought it was fucking cool
u did a great job on this i hope to see some more of ur work on the front page soon :D
With a good helping of polish this could be great. The tone of the movie isn't really consistant--is it trying to be horror or humor? This execution proves you can't have both sometimes.
Great effort though.
A short series of blah.
Granted, I just turned off the video after the third thing popped onto the screen with a loud noise accompanying it, but after three times I think I get the picture. The humor itself was minimal at best. I say I must find it hard to believe that this is based off a real story. Blue dead looking people don't commonly follow the living around where I reside. On the grand scale of all things, 0 to 10, I'll rate you a three since the graphics obviously had more work put into them than the story itself, even if the color scheme made it hard to distinguish things from time to time. If it wasn't for the work on the graphics, however, I would've just put this on par with about a quarter of the videos on YouTube. Normal and quiet to sudden excorcist girl with annoying screaming (luckily, you didn't just have high pitched squealing to give me a head ache).
great story and good animations but then again there was nothing that really happend but since this was based on a real life i know this must of been scary.
I found this animation to be tediously slow-paced, not very funny, and lacking in plot/storyline and actual animation.
I know you were shooting for a spooky aura, but I thought the dark color scheme actually detracted from the movie. It was hard to tell what was going on, mostly in the begining, this is a shame because the artwork in the movie was pretty good.
The pace was so slow it was unbearble though. I had time to walk away and fix a cup of coffee before the main charactor even started to speak (or text in this case).
I found the storyline to be broken up awkwardly, the scenes did not mesh up well. Nor was the dialouge very engaging or well planned/written. As a whole this animation seemed quite jumbled.
Even though you obviously spent alot of time on the scenery and art, there wasn't much actual animation, it panned out to be nothing more than a glorified slideshow in my opinion.
I didn't factor in the fact that I found the humor unfunny, because that is a personal thing, but I'm giving you a 4 outta 10 because I found it weak in all aspects except art. I believe your should work on your pacing and storyboarding a bit.
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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