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*To get the most out of the movie, I recomend using ear phones and volume up.
I also recomend watching this at night
One of my very recent works since Pina Story.
Based on actual events..
Special thx to some of the NG fans in credits. tysm
I found this animation to be tediously slow-paced, not very funny, and lacking in plot/storyline and actual animation.
I know you were shooting for a spooky aura, but I thought the dark color scheme actually detracted from the movie. It was hard to tell what was going on, mostly in the begining, this is a shame because the artwork in the movie was pretty good.
The pace was so slow it was unbearble though. I had time to walk away and fix a cup of coffee before the main charactor even started to speak (or text in this case).
I found the storyline to be broken up awkwardly, the scenes did not mesh up well. Nor was the dialouge very engaging or well planned/written. As a whole this animation seemed quite jumbled.
Even though you obviously spent alot of time on the scenery and art, there wasn't much actual animation, it panned out to be nothing more than a glorified slideshow in my opinion.
I didn't factor in the fact that I found the humor unfunny, because that is a personal thing, but I'm giving you a 4 outta 10 because I found it weak in all aspects except art. I believe your should work on your pacing and storyboarding a bit.
i've got to admit there was a bit of the grudge in it but i liked it specially the quit line thing at the elevator heh
That was great, amazing artwork, I just started using flash and I can only imagine the kind of work you had to put into this, kudos.
I enjoyed that alot. Based on true events? I wanna find that blue guy, too!
Somewhat of a spook.
It really didn't look promising at first, but I kept on watching. I do agree it works much better with headphones and at night with the lights off. The animation could have been more fluid, otherwise it was a little nice spook to the eyes. And definitely good artwork and background. Nice.
The Fine Bros have an announcement.
What happens when a certain Storm trooper got rescued....
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