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My first Flash movie! It started out as just a picture of a bee to try out this Swish program, then I added music and stuff around it and made a movie.
It's short and sweet - I think you'll like it. I hope it adds a little culture to your life. ;-) You might want to turn up your speakers a little, because the music is kinda quiet.
Please, if you vote low, give me some positive feedback so I will know how to improve. Thanks!
It's been done before
You could have done better than used a midi file. Midis are crap.
As for the flash, It's not an original idea at all. Ive seen it tons of times.
Next time make it longer and use some better animations.
Cool, thanks for the review. I didn't even know this old thing was still in the rotation. When it was done over 4 years ago, it was a pretty original idea. So yeah, lots of people have done it since then, and done it better.
And yes, I agree that MIDIs are crap. :)
Only one problem: A damn popup popped up RIGHT when the bee was about to explode, so that ticked me off. Otherwise, IT WAS FUCKING HILARIOUS!
do not do that again
u scared me u frak when the bee die u gave me a heartattack.
not bad for a first try
i always go a bit easy on the first flashes anyone makes, and im a harsh reviewer. so count that 5 as a complement to your work. anyone who is thinking of making flash movies should watch this.
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