Score: 8

"But he was supposed to be an Ewok!"

by: PicklesFan

date: March 30, 2009

Nah but really, awesome-cool animation.

Score: 7

"It was great..."

by: SkullsNSkate

date: January 15, 2009

I liked it and all, and seeing it was for a callab, the shortness.
But you cou.d have did way better on the backgrounds. That's the main situation in this Flash.
Well its all coo'.
7/10 4/5.
-Deondre.

Score: 6

"Made me smile"

by: Bezman

date: August 25, 2008

really short, but it had a couple of decent visual gags going.

I liked the koala wave, raised eyebrow, head-in-bowl, glass hitting him. Full of little touches that really matter!

The backgrounds could be better - the one when you zoom in on the koala looks specially bad - like there's something odd going on, with objects floating in the bg.

Maybe you could have taken a minute to delete those and sketch out an actual bg in the colours you use for the large symbols?

The green one looked cool though.

Score: 8

"Nice."

by: Fro

date: August 24, 2008

Animation/Graphics - A great style that I love to see when watching flash submissions on newgrounds. The animation was smooth and the drawings were well done. The colors and backgrounds were also fine.

Story - I won't review on how short it was because after a quick read over the author comments that you have made I realize that this was a part for a collab that wasn't continued for some reason. To bad it wasn't continued. What exactly was the collab about? Overall the flash its self was sort of funny. Well done.

Audio - I thought the audio was fine. The voice was fine and the background music was also fine.

Overall, this would of made a great addition to a collab. Too bad it died out though.

C52

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Score: 6

"Needs more"

by: Coop83

date: August 23, 2008

The animation is good, but the sound quality lets you down. It's a little too much static for my liking, plus it's way too short to be taken seriously - you could ahve made this as a bytesize flash, which would have looked great on the Front Page of Newgrounds, but other than that, I'd say you need to make a longer flash to be looked upon as a serious animator.

A few tweaks here and there, and suddenly this flash looks better - build some things around this song. Have a guy talking to his friend "So, I've got this audition for a part in a commercial tomorrow." "What have you gotta do?" *Dances* "Well, that's lame." "Yeah, but it pays better than your paper route :P"

That's just something off the cuff, so play about with it and I'll be happy to comment on the results.

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