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Do I eat the koala bear pancakes?
Well? DO I?
I am an ewok by SongsToWearPantsTo.com :) This was for a collab that's died. Tragically.
EDIT: Thanks for all the fantastic reviews guys.
But he was supposed to be an Ewok!
Nah but really, awesome-cool animation.
It was great...
I liked it and all, and seeing it was for a callab, the shortness.
But you cou.d have did way better on the backgrounds. That's the main situation in this Flash.
Well its all coo'.
Made me smile
really short, but it had a couple of decent visual gags going.
I liked the koala wave, raised eyebrow, head-in-bowl, glass hitting him. Full of little touches that really matter!
The backgrounds could be better - the one when you zoom in on the koala looks specially bad - like there's something odd going on, with objects floating in the bg.
Maybe you could have taken a minute to delete those and sketch out an actual bg in the colours you use for the large symbols?
The green one looked cool though.
I have to admit I'm appalling at backgrounds, I tried to get away with going for a stylized one. I guess that really didn't work. Thanks for the review blah blah :) I always appreciate them.
Animation/Graphics - A great style that I love to see when watching flash submissions on newgrounds. The animation was smooth and the drawings were well done. The colors and backgrounds were also fine.
Story - I won't review on how short it was because after a quick read over the author comments that you have made I realize that this was a part for a collab that wasn't continued for some reason. To bad it wasn't continued. What exactly was the collab about? Overall the flash its self was sort of funny. Well done.
Audio - I thought the audio was fine. The voice was fine and the background music was also fine.
Overall, this would of made a great addition to a collab. Too bad it died out though.
~ Review Request Club ~
Ah-ha! The first person who didn't judge it on the length. The collab was the '10 second collab' where all authors had to make an animation which is 10 seconds long. I really wish it hadn't died too, it would have been ace, the first one certainly was!
<3 for the review.
The animation is good, but the sound quality lets you down. It's a little too much static for my liking, plus it's way too short to be taken seriously - you could ahve made this as a bytesize flash, which would have looked great on the Front Page of Newgrounds, but other than that, I'd say you need to make a longer flash to be looked upon as a serious animator.
A few tweaks here and there, and suddenly this flash looks better - build some things around this song. Have a guy talking to his friend "So, I've got this audition for a part in a commercial tomorrow." "What have you gotta do?" *Dances* "Well, that's lame." "Yeah, but it pays better than your paper route :P"
That's just something off the cuff, so play about with it and I'll be happy to comment on the results.
[Review Request Club]
Yeah, this would be ace on front page. I have a feeling Tom Fulp doesn't like me all too much. I am sorry about the length, as I said it had to be exactly 10 seconds long and I though, well the collabs over but I can still submit it. I'm very glad I did because of the great response.
But yeah, thank you for the kind words, it's always nice to have some constructive criticism.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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