Score: 2

"Too short for me to get anything out of."

by: Bezman

date: August 25, 2008

Maybe I'm missing something here. I didn't enjoy this at all, as some other seemed to.

I like the style of your graphics - having outline-only work is a change at least and it's cool to see different visual styles. The white-for-shadow is cool.

The walking is a bit robotic - the way the knee bends and brings the foot down so close to its starting position looks odd to me.

The gothic typeface seems suiting.

The buttons could do more to complement that though - maybe spend some time making a sort of gothic decoration around the button curves and rigid swirls, rather than just having a rectangle?

Or maybe don't use the font at such a small size like for 'replay' - those details don't seem suited to the size.

The lack of sound really made it seem unfinished.

In the end, this was really too short for me to get anything out of. Not that it was necessarily bad per se but nothing I saw got me particularly excited.

Score: 8

"Good intro."

by: Fro

date: August 24, 2008

I can see why this one got you the job. :) Even though you say no extras on it, I will still review it like I was helping you make it better.

Animation/Graphics - The animation was very smooth and the drawings were very nicely done. The colors were good since it looks like they were suppose to be dark in this flash submission.

Story - Very short, but I didn't allow that to bring your rating down at all for one reason. It's an intro and they are usually suppose to be short. You do get a feeling when watching it though that you don't want to feel when watching an intro. That feeling is that it's over as soon as it starts. I have a small suggestion on what would probably get rid of this feeling. Make the walk more slow and dramatic. That would add several seconds and would get rid of that BOOM ITS DONE feeling that you get when watching it.

Audio - Sadly it has none. Hopefully when it is put into whatever it was made for then the audio will be covered. An intro needs music no matter what though.

Overall, not bad. The suggestion that I made might get rid of that feeling that its over as soon as it starts.

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Score: 7

"Why low score"

by: phantomlassuk

date: August 24, 2008

I know this is like very short but, the intro looks promising. I want to see the finshed product, please release it.

Graphics.7/10 For the short duration we see , iam very impressed by the animation. We see a man walking toward the alter, the cross looks intruging. I liked the style of art you have done. The back background and figures ,are good to short though to see much.

Sound N/A No sound im not going to rat,e but it was a shame. About the lack of sound, still it did not spoil the movie.

This is an exellant introuction its got the flavour ,of making you want to see the full feature. The cross and the white pencil like figures, are a good combination. The fact it looked dramatic the religious elements ,are a winner makes the movie exciting. The intro good.

As i said before it way to short, you hardly see the movie. Then wham! its over with. Its a pity no sound, as it would have made it even better.

Ovreal a good looking movie way underscored.

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Score: 6

"Needs sound"

by: Coop83

date: August 23, 2008

The animation is good for an introduction tag. What I would suggest is some sort of addition to the package in the form of sound - it seemed like there was a flash of lightning in the background, so why not just have that as the sound effect, which sets it up.

Nothing too fancy, just that.

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Score: 8

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by: Haggard

date: August 21, 2008

Nice and short intro. I like the artwok. It's a bit different from what you normally see, so it's always nice to see a change.

I think it would be better with some music and/or sounds, though. A short but intense theme would fit in pretty good here.

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