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An innocent cartoon.
can't wait for longer clips mang...
Alright, man. Thanks for the review :)
You get a ZERO
Really, if you are going to submit something please put more than 10 minutes of work in it.
Okay, why don't you get flash and see if you can do anything near as well...
YOU HAVE TEN MINUTES GOGOGOGOGO
This movie is a four or five second loop of a boy going to a
telescope and getting abducted.
You need to get rid of all the lines and also make your flash longer.
The drawings were not the best I seen.
So please improve on it.
Note: Please do not take offence to the things I have said, I'm only trying to help.
If I made it with stick figures and replaced all the charm with violence, would it be better?
its too short and needs sound.
There's nothing wrong with it being short, and it has sound.
Honestly, why does it matter that it's an eight second loop? sorry that it's slightly shorter than your attention span
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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