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This is my first flash. It started out as a little experiment, and then just became this. I know it's short, and I know its pretty crappy, but please have mercy. This actually took me three days to make, and a lot of hard work went into it.
Feedback would be much appriciated!
A good first flash. I like the style of art and the music is good. a little pointless but its otherwise good.
Pretty good, if this is your first flash i can't wait to see more!
For a, i quote "Crappy first attempt" I liked it. It made me smile, not quite sure why???
thanks, i'm kind of suprised this got through!
Not bad at all
I loved the music and though it was short it did have character. Work on your art and you'll be fine. Good first attempt. Much better than most.
I liked it!
Doesn't matter wether it's short or not - you've got talent and created a real feel good movie. Two thumbs up ;)
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