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the Seconds part of my skating videos, I've seen my last one, and really improved.
I really didn't made a story, but enjoy!!
please review it because I want to know what I can improve!!
and how to get the medals?
little help would be great.
Best flash I've seen in a while, this deserves to be in the front page
...You are kidding, right?
What you need to improve:
Most important: Practice, practice, practice!! But that one you are doing just fine :)
Secondly: Grow some age. If you are under 16, you have no change making anything good.
Then what you must do:
Practice drawing, get a humanish model and draw replica of it.
Leave the stick figures out.
Clouds and other bg object, make 'em more alive. Moving, not sticked on the screen.
Plot. Make something interesting.
If you can draw to paper, you can draw it with computer. More practice! Draw different objects and scripts.
If you wish to make easier animations first, find gameoverse series on the newgrounds, and take sample from it. Don't try to copy the same idea, but you can use the same style. Flash doesn't need to be all good graphic to be good. Plot is the main what matters.
THe reason that the medals don't work...is because there really don't seem to BE any real ones. The only two medals available are "Test Medal" and "Test Medal 2." This is OBVIOUSLY an indicator of a lack of medals.
So STOP ASKING!!
ALso, the video was...okay. Needs improvement, but I know you're not an expert, and neither am I, so 6/10.
your medals dont work.
How will Kratos survive the Night?
A story about a kid and idk...
A short muisc video based on the classic song "The Window Cleaner" sung by George Formby
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