Score: 0

"Eh? WTF? That was just too random."

by: AfroUnderscoreStud

date: October 13, 2005

At first it seemed a little slow pace as you just showed the kid for too long and then you did the same with the teacher. Then eventually the random stuff started happening, a paper plane hit hr and for soem reason she bled and then out fo nowhere 2 baseballs and a baseball bat hit her, there should have been a reason for it to happen as it was just far too random, some movies work as being random due to the style that they're done in, but this was just done in a normal flash movie style and it just never works. You should have added some story into this along with some interesting events taking place as it would have made there be something to watch within the movie. You also shouldn't have shown the faces for as long as you did, as there was absolutely nothing taking place on screen at the time and it just made it seem incredibly slow-paced and boring. You also needed sound within this movie, it was absolutely vital, the movie just seemed really odd without it and it made it seem worse than it actually was.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

Score: 1

"<giggle> <giggle>?"

by: zanz

date: December 28, 2002

No sound, tired storyline and crude grahics...needs a lot of work fella...needs a lot of work

Score: 4

"<giggle> <giggle>"

by: XwaynecoltX

date: December 20, 2002

Lol, ok nice artwork, and why no sound, and that teacher is very scary hehehe, but really, iy needs some sound, like the story, keep up the work...

Score: 6

"That teacher scares me"

by: Rhete

date: September 29, 2000

This would've been great with sounds. I can just picture that teacher screaming...

Score: 10

"Absolutely Fabulous!"

by: thesandman09

date: August 11, 2000

I was so deeply touched by this movie that i can barely keep the tears off my keyboard. thank you for giving this wonderful masterpiece to the world. I was very impressed with the artistic talent as well.