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Aug 4, 2008 | 12:37 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place August 5, 2008

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This is my latest short, a project I had to do for college. My goal was to create a short story that had no voice acting, a touch of mystery and a unique look. The ending has changed so many times I can't even count them, and that was the ending that I kept, mainly due to lack of time.

So here it is, chill, watch and review

UPDATE- Sweet, thanks for the frontpage newgrounds!

Reviews


mengel13mengel13

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 12, 2008

Without Words...

WOW...a powerful message sent through without the use of words. The animation is extremely well drawn out. This will definitely be one of my submissions for The Newgrounds Collection.


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Professor-DoomProfessor-Doom

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 12, 2008

You ruined it.

If you didn't show the ring right at the beginning, it wouldn't have ruined the movie.



Loath-someLoath-some

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 11, 2008

Very brave

I must say it was very brave of you to submit a such mature told story. With that I mean; more mature audiences would probably get this kind of story. Younger people might would have given the comment "I don't get it!" Yet, the story could have been dragged a little more. It was just on the edge of being too short.

The texture was really adding effect into this animation, I really liked it. Some of the drawings could have been a little better but that's alright.

Keep this up, I would really want to see something like this from you once more.



autopoieticautopoietic

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 11, 2008

dark and different

the textural effect was well worth it



willy-wizzwilly-wizz

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 11, 2008

small scale, great storytelling.

Its not generic newgrounds, which is always rewarding, although perhaps not literally for the artist.

The line based style of animation was simple, not very original but the rusty texture used through-out made everything look a lot more professional and interesting. But at the same time I found it a bit intrusive and even distracting towards the start, especially during a panning scene. Maybe thats something you should keep an eye out for in the future if you use the same rusty texture.

Great whole story, and the title brings everything together at the end really well. I look forward to seeing you become one of newground's greats.