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Aug 4, 2008 | 12:37 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place August 5, 2008

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This is my latest short, a project I had to do for college. My goal was to create a short story that had no voice acting, a touch of mystery and a unique look. The ending has changed so many times I can't even count them, and that was the ending that I kept, mainly due to lack of time.

So here it is, chill, watch and review

UPDATE- Sweet, thanks for the frontpage newgrounds!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

iggy my wantee

This needs more Mario and penis.

No actually, this was really nice. The story was interesting and their acting very nicely clear and nicely done. Some of the art work towards the end got shoddy, but overall this was pretty nice.

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Valerofond responds:

Hey it's that Bambee guy! Sup man

Yeah thanks to my amazing time managment skills the end was kinda rushed I suppose


Rated 5 / 5 stars

So full of win...

Thanks for finally sharing this with the rest of the world instead of keeping it to yourself you greedy grecko.

Can't wait til I see you again and we indulge in faintly racist humour.

Miss you xxx


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Rated 5 / 5 stars

Agree with Allam

I agree with Allam that you could have made it less predicatable... like make us presume he had a ring in the beginning instead of knowing... Anyways... Loved it... I wonder what endings you went through... and which ending you would have chosen if you had more time.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Pretty good...

But it probably would have been better if you didn't show the part about the ring at the beginning of the flash, that way it would have been a bit less expected later on.

Nicely animated and designed clip.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Too cool for the internet, man!!!!