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  • Necropolis
    Necropolis Blood, bullets and Hot Cheetos... Just another day in Necropolis.

Author Comments

This is a revamp of what I sent in last week, it contains a *new scene* that wraps up all the mysteries about the past in previous episodes. I'm not making a DevilSlayer 5, this tells you what you need to know.
Length - 4 minutes.
24 FPS
Anime Inspired
Graphic Heavy at parts.

The rest of the story starts with the Nightgun Prologue.

Reviews


PsychopathPsychopath

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 17, 2008

Very nice.

At last some character development! Not that there wasn't any already but personally I think that the necropolis/Devil Slayer runs thin in the category of character development, you really don't get to analyse the relationships between character's that much anymore.

Although I love the show, this is pretty much the only one I favorited.

Animation was decent. Although the lip syncing was off in one place the rest is spot on.

Also, you may want to lower the volume on your music and increase the volume of your dialogue/monologue. I could barely hear what the old man/english demon said half the time

Somthing about fish taco's I think... =P


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DoormouseDoormouse

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 2, 2008

Hmm

Well your pesky rat fiend is back. The doctor character, though he was supposed to be understandably old, lost context in terms of animation. He was completely inconsistent with the rest of your style. You have three to four storylines going on, but you adressed one where you previously moved in many directions. Lack inspiration for consistency eh? Well, you may slowly sway the rat to leave you alone, due to complete lack of interest.
New General's point about the lack of detail to make the Devil distinguishable from the other imortals is also annoying. Unless you were to show the Devil's ability to lose such details, which would require longer, fuller detailed episodes much earlier on. But again my interest in your work in genereal wanes. Though your potential as an artist still stands.


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GrandvisionGrandvision

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars October 29, 2008

Eh?

Voice acting was quite bad, animation smoothness was average but wobbly. The Sound effects lacked bass or loudness. Story was quite boring actually. Instead of trying to make it scary, you made it foolish. Some scenes looked like he was fucking someone. Seriously. I guess you should improve the smoothness of the animation and the story because it down right uninteresting right now. I see that you won't continue this series. Well in your next one think about all the things I said in this review. The olds man face looked Chinese but that doesn't really matter it just makes him a little childish if you know what I mean.

The devil looked like 21 year old boy. Try to implement some wrinkles or cuts on old, or devil like people to make them more horrifying or generally more detailed.


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JazLyte responds:

Ok, thanks for pointing out the obvious for me!


VigorousJammerVigorousJammer

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 18, 2008

great!

I love the directing, the art style, and most of the voice actors were really good, but Doc's generic "old man" voice could of used some work... it sounded a bit forced...
overall, though, a great submission...


JazLyte responds:

Thanks! I'll make sure to talk to his actor about it.


9threaver9threaver

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 13, 2008

more action

i know this was more story based but it would be good to see more fighting. pretty short too


JazLyte responds:

Yeah, well, 9 out of my 11 submissions have lots of fighting, especially the Nightgun series. Check that out.