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Submitted: 07/31/2008 | 09:52PM EST
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Current Score: 3.38 / 5.00
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Basically, stay on the white path.
aint quite finished yet ill be putting more levels and stuff in
i just wanted to get some feedback. tell me how i could improve the appearance, level design and that
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Average Score: 5.1 / 10
"good"
make the end circle a difernt coulour the skull when you died was a nice touch
"Keep it up"
It's great to see a newcomer to the scene. A few suggestions: To prevent cheating add onClipEvent(mouseDown){ gotoAndStop(fail) } At the moment, clicking and dragging across the walls allows the player to cheat.
Although it doesn't matter at the moment, always optimize your vector shapes. In flash, select your shape and go to Modify>>Shape>>Optimize
Don't dwell in such simple games for too long. Challenge yourself-make a game that is one step above what you think you can make and learn from there.
-Ian
lol i know
thanks for the code
jim gonna try adding movie clips to make it more like a mouse avoider not ust a maze
"Not bad im just fed up of seeing these games!"
Strong Points:-Challenging Weak Points:-Not original(too many of the damn games!) -No coloring or texturing -No music or sound -Too short no levels
Overall:Challenging but basic!Here are a couple of suggestions to spice it up a little!First off, if you added some color or backgrounds that alone would improve the game.Then add a catchy song(techno or trance) you know dance music.Now the important part the actual maze!You have to be original think hard about moving obstacles or random events!I mean its up to you but i think this would help if ever you dicide to make another one.Keep up the work what I'm saying isn't meant to be mean i just want to help!
"another mouse maze......"
Pretty bland. No music, simple Paint graphics, nothing to signify the end of level (it's the lone dot. Could confuse some people) Also, the simple right-click cheat is intact. Not extraordinary.
"so it ends?"
it's fun but does it end where there's the one dot?
there are 3 levels, but i accidently left in that moving dot at the end, i was just trying something out