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This is my all new white demons episode. I was VERY exited to finally have this completed. I expect to have another episode up tomorrow but I don't know. For now just enjoy this one.
After I catch up on some of my movies I might take a brake, so be ready for that XD.
LEAVE A REVIEW NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just need to improve mic, and the the motion of your clay men!
keep it up! D12
Didly12 didn't do this, I did.
Okay, you need a pre-loader.
You need to make the animations better. Try practicing stop motion more.
And you obviously got the Idea from Knox Korner.
I'm giving you a 4 since you obviously put time and effort in but that's about it. You're voice acting is unpleasant at the least, there is no emotion whatsoever and the occasional breathing in the microphone does not really turn me on. I switched off after they took a look inside the "road kill diner". The concept is ok, just work on your voice acting :).
Thanks for the review dude. I will work on that.
I know this is a claymation work and that makes it stopframe but, really... you need to smooth it out and make it more... normal... i dunno how to say it. better voice acting is needed and some more original names. captain yellow.... yeah... interesting though. it has potential
I named him yellow for the lulz. lol.
I just want to die now
It had to be clay?? Anyway, there needs to be a better hook, more actiony that grabs the viewers off the bat, i closed it right when "Cpt. Yellow' of the claytantic or something said you know about the white demons
Its funny. "Captain Yellow owner of the Claytanic" I wanted it to be kinda funny.
A short film about a park bench
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