Interesting.. but poorly done.
Animation was weird, it was too short, too many weird pauses, and voice acting was rather annoying. The boat in the pool was interesting though and it was mildly funny.
But this was overall poor.
1.5 out of 5 stars....
White Demons 2
July 31, 2008 –November 3, 2020
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
This is my all new white demons episode. I was VERY exited to finally have this completed. I expect to have another episode up tomorrow but I don't know. For now just enjoy this one.
After I catch up on some of my movies I might take a brake, so be ready for that XD.
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Reviews
Great film!
just need to improve mic, and the the motion of your clay men!
keep it up! D12
<deleted> responds:
Didly12 didn't do this, I did.
No.
Okay, you need a pre-loader.
You need to make the animations better. Try practicing stop motion more.
And you obviously got the Idea from Knox Korner.
BE ORIGINAL
<deleted> responds:
ok...
Bummer
I'm giving you a 4 since you obviously put time and effort in but that's about it. You're voice acting is unpleasant at the least, there is no emotion whatsoever and the occasional breathing in the microphone does not really turn me on. I switched off after they took a look inside the "road kill diner". The concept is ok, just work on your voice acting :).
<deleted> responds:
Thanks for the review dude. I will work on that.
Nice try
I know this is a claymation work and that makes it stopframe but, really... you need to smooth it out and make it more... normal... i dunno how to say it. better voice acting is needed and some more original names. captain yellow.... yeah... interesting though. it has potential
<deleted> responds:
I named him yellow for the lulz. lol.
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- 0.48 / 5.00