Score: 8

"this is okay"

by: YoinK

date: June 3, 2009

It might have been better to put the credits at the end. Some of the voice acting was poor.... but other than that it was nicely drawn/animated.

Score: 9

"Waitin for Number 2"

by: Crackerstak

date: March 7, 2009

It was pretty good.when i heard you made a flash for some reason i expected it to not be very good.but that was funny.The robo-porn was a bit odd though.
The only reason i got a newgrounds account is because you said i should review your movie.and so here we are.I've been wanting to get into flash but it looked hard..and i don't have flash lol.Nice movie though.

Score: 10

"Actually, this was pretty sick."

by: Enigma1087

date: February 13, 2009

The music at the scene select screen was a bit scratchy but I didn't hate it. And you can't go wrong with those blood fx either. Very clear and sharp details, good plots... I like the work.

Score: 7

"I cant wait for next one"

by: phantomlassuk

date: August 16, 2008

This is a really good episode its got enough ,to keep you wanting to see more just right.

Graphics.8/10 The look of this is highly polished in the intro ,the block white Mike he looked very good. The close up of him was not as good it looked, a little less detailed then the introuction. However the look in this is very good the mouth, moving the blood and ,details are impressive.

Sound.7/10 For the most part i thought the voice actors are very good. While lacking passion in parts, they made me laugh. I thought Ivan the fox russian accent is good a little, sterotype no offense. The voices made me laugh maybe because, of the way they speak. It did sound like aprt from Ivan that they were not emotional .enough in parts a little cold and lacking feelings.

On the most part i thought this is ,a very good first episode. The main ones Mike Stefan, made me giggle. With the two robots having sex it was funny, and the humor dry and clever. I enjoyed the way the little jokes are subtle, but good as it did not make you think. Ivan a interesting character hes seems to be quite ,a dark one with issues. The way he cried was good, as it made me feel for him. The way it ended was good ,i felt this had a great cliff hanger.

I guess what made this not as good, as mentioned is the voice acting. In Mike and Sfefan was lacking ,feeling like you were going through the motions. They did not seem to care much about anthing. i felt Ivan was the most one with felling.

Ovreall this is good for first episode ,maybe put more feeling in to your voices.

review request club

Score: 3

"I couldn't care about your characters."

by: Bezman

date: August 14, 2008

This movie just seemed really slow to me and in the end, I never really cared about the characters.

The Pico-day pre-loader edit was cool.

Why on earth did you blur up so many of the pics in the intro?

The Stefan bit with the robots was kinda lame.

Your blocks were hard to tell apart. Maybe making them different colours - blue, pink, green etc. would help? Or give them more identifying features - not just an item of clothing.

I kinda liked the simplified hair of the receptionist and the assassin was well drawn - specially in the intro and the shot of him eating the burger.

The 'miraculous survival' could have been a decent ending if we'd had some backstory about these characters. We know nothing about this 'little kid' and next to nothing about your other characters. You could have told us so much more - pick an element that sums up who they are as a person or sums up their relationship and show that.

You're asking us to suspend disbelief and just go along for the ride when we don't have a starting point, so to speak.

Your 'I wasn't expecting you' - was that a mistake? Because though it made me chuckle, it didn't make any sense.

Not terrible - the voices were clear, there were some decent elements in the visuals and some song choices were great.

All in all, I think you need to take a step back and try to show us a bit more about your characters. At the moment, I found it hard to care about it all.