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This is the first animations made.
I have a regular show on youtube.
episode 1-4 are damn awful
5-8 are getting decent
Now on season 2 we are adding this cartoon but letting new grounds see it separate first.
Not bad, not bad, but...
work on the audio! Especially the speech. If the volume is too low you can't hear/understand all the jokes 'n' stuff, so it cuts down the enjoyment. Also I don't like to keep my stereos at max and then shit in my pants because of some loud JEEESUUUUS! sound or whatever that was...
I'll go on ahead with the technical overview first: The drawing style was great. Been awhile since I've seen an attempt to draw the person rather than just use a stick figure or a blob. The sound quality could have been a bit more clear. The story line was entertaining. I gave you a 5/10 for that. So all marks.
I don't judge harshly on personal views as I know they are varied-I understood what you wanted to get across. Personally I didn't laugh as I am not a fan of jokes targeted towards children, mental retardation, or babies. Pregnant wife and all that jazz makes you a stickler about things :p I gave you a 4/10 overall on that. So 3/5 and 9/10, good wok-hope to see something in the future.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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