cool

no one won you know

Nice!

Was that FBF???

No one won!

It looked fantastic, I was hypnotized by the movement. But, what happened with the egg... You should've shown it hatching or something, it would've made a great epilogue to round the story out, and point out that the gun gave it's life to save the egg. It's a great movie, and it's refreshing to see someone take on board criticism and make improvements to their work.

AWESOME!

You rock.. YOur movie ROCKS!

*Stunned Silence*

Where to start?

The animation is brilliant. I asked for a white-on-black setup, you delivered it, transformed it into your own unique style, and combined with a kick-ass preloader, you deserve this 10/10. The fire is awesome (that's important too!).

This animation had structure, it had a beginning, a middle, and an end. The end was a bit abrupt but that's trivial. The sound effects are bang-on, the series of events that the animation followed were so incredibly smoothly transitioned, it's incredible.

In the first version you had potential, here you followed up and sufficiently proved yourself as a newgrounder.