Score: 0

"sigh"

by: Skill47

date: January 19, 2009

1: it is not phoenix wrong
2: it is wrong that you made a cruddy phoenix wrong
3: it should be comedy not ACTION!
4: i can't agree with the artwork but as long as you like it
5: never steal things from people
6: And never post ACTION ON COMEDY! jeez

Score: 0

"OMFG"

by: diablosauce89

date: November 9, 2008

NO bad what is wrong with you its a cross between thing thing and madness series and yes you did get I believe the entire beginning talk scene from thing thing three and don't lie about it cause I already know that you did. come up with your own art work and animation there's no way you were 10 when you made this stop lying too many holes in your story about it anyway. Now if youll excuse me I need to gouge out my eyes and stop my ears from bleeding.

Score: 1

"the guy below me is right"

by: rorychally

date: August 10, 2008

this is bad

not original. So you thought of a character who looks just like thing thing? And madness was around before 2006.
If your so amazing at artwork then why is this thing just a bunch of sprites?
I would probably like this if you actually put some thought or effort into it.
Seriously, if you can honestly say that you put your full effort into this, at the age of ,what, 13? 14?
Then don't bother makng any more, because you seriously can't use flash.
Sorry, but you make me sooo angry trying to pass the ideas of thing thing and madness off as your own.

+1 for no reason

~RoryChally~

Score: 0

"Original? My arse."

by: Wolfears2

date: July 28, 2008

1) Don't even TRY saying it ws coincidence. It even has a line stolen from thing thing.
2) If you were 10 in '06, then you're 12 now. Too young for newgrounds.
3) How is it "amazing artwork"?
4) Action music doesn't work for walking down a hallway
5) It's too choppy. What is it, 12 fps?
6) Seriously, write your own stories.
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Score: 5

"Um..."

by: Satoris

date: July 28, 2008

I'll have to agree with the person below me, the writing was a little weak. And Skulsta, when somebody refers to the "writing" aspect of a piece they mean a little bit more than just spelling. They mean character development, believability of the situation (even if the piece is Sci-Fi/fantasy), words and phrases the characters would used based on their personality and so on and so forth. You have a good idea going but maybe bring it back down to Earth a little bit and give me something that I can sink my teeth into. The story seems a bit outlandish.