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This is an elaborated flash I made, it's not a preview or anything, it's more like the first chapter of his life.
I followed all the rules this time, my first submition was kind of erased, sooo, here it is and enjoy.
Its NOT that bad.
I dont understand why people are so harsh when reviewing. I mean, I laughed your mission is accomplished. :)
Next time make it a little longer though, and a "the end" screen wouldnt be superfluous too ;)
I'ts gonna be way longer next time, and more elaborate.
Random only equals funny if done right, in which this case it isn't. Hard to follow, even for randomness.
Mmm, I see.
It certainly SUCKED because it is nonsense...now...
I have no idea what that was even supposed to be about.
first of all it was completely random...and not in a funny or good way
secondly it went by so fast you have no clue what's going on
thirdly it just ends with a white screen, next time add something even if it's just "the end" or "finite" if ya wanna be fancy
lastly the first review was constructive criticism and your response was quite unnecessary......also, newgrounds is no place for your suicide notes
better luck next time,
Hey, that was sarcasm!
Don't be mad just cause i'm pretty, :)
guess what? it sucked
i dont know what you did, but this flash didnt have any substance
it isnt uncommon to have very little substance in a flash, but you jusst wasted a portion of my life that im never getting back, seriously im a bit insulted
...just a bit?... u_u
That was definitely unexpected.
First off, I'm not quite sure what the hell that was. It was completely random.
Second, I'm not quite sure what was up with the voiceover. I'm about 90% sure that was just gibberish and not another language. If it was gibberish, well, a regular voice over would have done the job. If it was another language, than first off, it was very slurred so even if I did know the language, I probable wouldn't be able to understand it and second, English please. Or at least say it's in another language.
Thirdly, it just spontaneously ended without any notification to the viewer that there isn't anything after the long pause of white.
Lastly, the animation of the guy at the beginning of the flash was okay, however, the rest of it was just fast, hard to follow, and poorly tweened (if at all). If you're going to do something like that, at least give the viewer an idea of what is going on.
You are right, I should kill myself
The basis of this video it's meant to be random.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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