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Jul 26, 2008 | 4:32 PM EDT

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A test video i made to practice my animation skills please tell me how to improve

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SpyGuy14SpyGuy14

Rated 2 / 5 stars

The worst shit I ever saw in my life.

You are very bad at this, first off you told me you made this in under a day which you should take a lot more time to work on a flash and do a few thing's over, and last but not least you suck at drawing go buy a how to draw book from the local department store.



dshaw8772dshaw8772

Rated 4 / 5 stars

it was a fair vid

yea i agree the characters couldve been alot better but thats all really everything else was good :P



DaveofBladesDaveofBlades

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

erk...

THIS MAKES ME WANT TO RUN OUT IN THE STREET WITH A WHOLE BUNCH OF LETHAL WEAPONS, SHOOT/STAB EVERYONE TO DEATH, AND THEN FINALLY KILL MYSELF BECAUSE THIS WAS SO HORRIBLE!!!!!!1!!111!!!!!one!!!!eleve n!!!!

lol, that was fun :P anyways, that (horrible) joke out of the way, I have to say, the punch line was pretty good, the animation and character design could've been better... actually alot better, and there should have been a bit more destruction to get the point across, more than him shooting a poster and then blowing up one set of shelves


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Mayhem7Mayhem7

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

ehem...

Can you understand that newgrounds it's not a place for that crap?



petersohnpetersohn

Rated 2 / 5 stars

not bad

First thing to notice that the play button is really hard to click, you should use frame 4 of the button.
Otherwise not bad, but you should make the plot a bit clearer.


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