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Jill

wittyhobos

Author

Thomas Brush (wittyhobos)

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Date Submitted

07/25/2008 | 09:46PM EST

File Information

Movie | 1.6 MB

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Current Score

3.90 / 5.00

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SOUND UPDATE: I boosted the sound! Thanks for the suggestions! :)

Hey all. I haven't submitted in a while, so I hope you guys like this one as much as my other ones. :)
Sorry this one is so short, but I think the point of the animation was fullfilled.

-When it comes to the moral of the story, I swear the theme is bright and clear, but I would love if you guys would try and guess what it is about. I promise it's not just crap thrown on a screen, it actually means something. =)

-As for the plot, it's about a stupid man and a girl named Jill.

-As for lighting and effects, I love using complimentary colors. So I used pink and some sorrta wierd blueish green. I thought it showed the good and bad side of a woman and relationships in general.

-As for sound, I did most myself. (doing the part where the man breaks his leg was fun) but other sound credit, as usual, goes to ERH from freesoundproject.com

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Average Score: 8.0 / 10

Score: 7
Firebalt

"It was good"

date: August 8, 2008

I thought you could have expanded upon this. The artwork was fantastic, and i like the fact that it was more about atmosphere. But for this to score higher, it needs more actual animation.
As for the lighting touches and the colour that was brilliant and you show a lot of potential.

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Score: 8
Tophatwonder

"Creepy indeed."

date: July 31, 2008

the artwork and animation was awsome!
sound adds a nice atmosphere to it. very well done!

August 3, 2008

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thanks fella ;)

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Score: 9
Loath-some

"Great"

date: July 31, 2008

I love the feeling in this, the graphics and the environment is perfect. The voiceacting is also very good. It could have been even better if it was just a little bit longer so the viewer gets into the flash more before he jumps. Like closeups, they are always good. Closeups at hands shaking and the face expression and stuff.

However, keep this up!

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Score: 10
zpikdum

"very creepy..."

date: July 26, 2008

but the visual style is stunning and exceptionally well done. i personally believe the color scheme was good as well.
the audio was good too. i could hear the man well, but the women's part was somewhat difficult to hear. that made me turn up the volume of my speakers to a point when the man broke his leg, i freaked out. i dont know if that was intentional, but the sound of it made me cringe.
as for the moral of the story, i'm guessin its how a (bad) relationship can drag you so far down, that there is no escape from it or something. i think its synonymous with "taking the plunge". correct me if i'm wrong, but thats my guess.
anyways, this is a great movie and it is sure to keep me wondering on what the moral of the story is. keep up the good work.

July 26, 2008

Author's Response:

you are correct! thanks for the review and watching it. I love a respectable viewer.... =)

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Score: 8
flamedance58

"Wait.."

date: July 26, 2008

There was sound other than that cracking?!

Wow...well the animation is great, and color scheme was both interesting and unique. I didn't quite get the story but that's my fault I guess..though could the sound be upped a tad? I didn't know she spoke at all 'till I read one of the comments XD

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