Jill by wittyhobos



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Submitted: 07/25/2008 | 09:46PM EST

File Info: Movie | 1.6 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score: 4.09 / 5.00

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SOUND UPDATE: I boosted the sound! Thanks for the suggestions! :)

Hey all. I haven't submitted in a while, so I hope you guys like this one as much as my other ones. :)
Sorry this one is so short, but I think the point of the animation was fullfilled.

-When it comes to the moral of the story, I swear the theme is bright and clear, but I would love if you guys would try and guess what it is about. I promise it's not just crap thrown on a screen, it actually means something. =)

-As for the plot, it's about a stupid man and a girl named Jill.

-As for lighting and effects, I love using complimentary colors. So I used pink and some sorrta wierd blueish green. I thought it showed the good and bad side of a woman and relationships in general.

-As for sound, I did most myself. (doing the part where the man breaks his leg was fun) but other sound credit, as usual, goes to ERH from freesoundproject.com

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Average Score: 8.2 / 10

Score: 9
In-Out

"Jesus..."

by: In-Out
date: November 28, 2008

This left a very strong impression on me. All of the aspects were perfect. Your animating looked great, voice acting was nicely done too, and of course the plot. I simply loved the plot. From beginning until the end, that weird spooky feeling never left me. This is truly a piece of art.

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Score: 8
metalhead2k

"Nice atmosphere but..."

date: October 29, 2008

too short, no plot but excellent animation style. 8/10 - 4/5

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Score: 10
Naxster

"Interesting shot story."

date: October 25, 2008

So judging by your author comments and the story itself I'm gathering what you're saying here is that this man did a stupid thing because he loved this woman so much. Additionally that he did so knowing it might hurt. Perhaps I'm wrong. Artistically though I did like the drawings, the scenes and the color choices.

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Score: 8
dvp89

"Good, but..."

by: dvp89
date: October 25, 2008

I mean, that's all? I want to know what happen to that guy. :(

However, the voice acting is good. The concept is good (but too short). The sound is good. Well done. (But I want to know what happens next or something ¬¬)

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Score: 8
JonBro

"Cool, creepy stuff."

by: JonBro
date: October 25, 2008

The art, animation, and voice acting were all very impressive. However, the end came sooner than I was hoping, and it left me hanging, because I had no idea what just happened and I wanted to see more!

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