Score: 6
"Intriguing."
date: July 29, 2008
Like most trailers, this wasn't really entertaining in and of itself but the series seems promising.
The Times New Roman (?) fitted in well and I liked the 'twisted' word. Also, the ending with folk taking the pizza was awesome.
The first reveal of the characters had shock value, but I felt like they looked a bit hastily drawn - like maybe they could have had their lines refined or maybe some shading put in.
Well, in the end it's gonna be the script that makes or breaks this.
July 30, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
We've been refining the lines as per user reviews like yours.
The font was Trajan Pro, and the twisting 'Twisted' was my favorite part :)
Glad you liked the live action pizza. We're planning on using those as scene transitions.
Stay tuned ;)
